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Blood dripping, splashing against concrete hearts
One step out of line, we're sick of breaking necks
Full of empty threats
It feels oh so deliciously nasty and gruesome
She wants to end it all with her nine tailed whip
Our tears mean nothing to you, we plead for...

Licking my lips and tasting you twice
Scars that show of a bitter kiss so precise
Pulling away from the pain that allows you to shudder
Tight lipped grins; Scraped elbows and shins
Where did she hit you?

Straining to sink your teeth into freedom
Chanting chanting your name aloud
Sport your wounds defiant and proud
I seek that special word I've never heard before
Mercy, mercy me.

Fake leather and high heels with that mask
The one that never hid the true feelings of a monster
With cracked lips and two more broken hips
Living life high and mighty, she walks on broken glass
Cracking of a whip, did you get what you deserve?
©2007-2009 =MistressWinter
:iconmistresswinter:

Author's Comments

8D Pain! Pain pain pain paaaain! I like pain. Pain makes me numb.
I'm creepy like that :P

Anyways, I have one song on repeat and it's making me happy :] It's breaking free of my MCR binge XD I'll be like "Okay...I'll listen to Demolition Lovers then this song again, then Famous Last Words, and this song again." Dun dun dunnn, I'm bored. And tired. But it's so early D:

I'm lonely again.
I've developed an imaginary friend TT_TT
Him and I are going to have a pillow fight =]
-le sniff-

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:iconrainbowskittles01:
Don't worry, imaginary friends are cool :D
Lovely poem, and it's very though provoking.

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KAPOW!


"Oh how wrong we were to think that immortality meant never dying."
:iconsophocleszia:
that's some organic poem, gruesome imagery i must commend. :clap::clap::clap:

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(+)Je n' oublie jamais.(+)
:blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose:
:iconstorychick:
I think my jaw just hit the floor. lol Its really really good, nice use of metaphors

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εїз The Child Bee εїз
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And then check out the sequal! [link]
:iconjuniii3:
Imaginary friends are cool :XD:
Mine was called Claudia or something but she died ... disappeared ... I don't know - she's not around anymore :aww: (but maybe I just grew up^^)

I'm bored and I'm tired, too, so.... you're not alone with your suffering x333333

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Thanks for the memories
Even though they weren't so great
...
:iconephend:
Imaginary friends can't hurt ya so Yeah I like me :lol: well I did when I was little!

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Musical Angels fill the air so listen to them sing for you!
:iconasteria24:
I told my imaginary friend to f*ck off when I was 11. I had even imagined her an imaginary boyfriend. He was narcoleptic though.
:iconjackielfult:
You write way better than me, man.

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They don't know nothing about redemption.
They don't know nothing about recovery.
:iconmistresswinter:
Oh psh, whatever xD
There are so many of your pieces that are way better than this ;] Maybe even all of them are.


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I don't care if Monday's blue :cries:
Tuesday's gray and Wednesday too :raincloud:
Thursday I don't care about you :threaten:
It's Friday I'm in love:heart:
:iconjackielfult:
Shush, so not. Take the compliment, darn you! XDDD Don't argueeeeee

Because I'm so right.

MWAH. :blowkiss:

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They don't know nothing about redemption.
They don't know nothing about recovery.

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