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A Place For My Head by =MistressWinter:iconMistressWinter:



She laid there, sopping wet in that drenched hospital gurney, but it was just for rent. Before you knew it that body would vanish and all your worries and problems would be safely hidden underground, possibly fed to the worms. Frankly, you didn't really care but you argued and said otherwise.

Do you remember those chilly spring nights where she held your hand and whispered sweet nothings into your ear? When the cherry blossoms fell and all was right in the world? Of course you don't. She brainwashed you until you could think no more, at least not on your own. She had you wrapped around her finger so tight you would've done anything to get her attention.

Time wasn't kind as it widdled away at your freshly beating heart. So sickly sweet... How could anything but hatred pump into yout veins? Surely blood could not be found, not a trace. In that valley of sorrow where the trees grew black and crippled, did a soul speak to you? A harsh gale swims by and carries you down, but will you fall?

"Hoarse voices carressing your last wishes
Things never were so bad
Like those bullets knocking holes in your head
Falling leaves drip like tears.
Close your eyes; whisper false fears"
©2007-2009 =MistressWinter
:iconmistresswinter:

Author's Comments

Milky white eyes rolled back in disguise
Tongue flopped out and covered in grout
Sick tension surfaces high
Where are you and why won't you die?

(no, that is not from a song.)

Hello again. Just...writing. Writing to make myself feel better, as if anything could.
Depression hurts. It hurts all those around you. Don't succumb, kids. Don't ever let it take you alive. Don't go down without a fight.

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:iconcornstarch10:
Yay, another first comment. I don't get depressed a lot, so I guess (why I guess I don't know) thats good for me. What's making you depressed? And nice title. I just listened to that a minute ago. And as I said before, your writing really is good. I remember when you had that book you had for that school project and you had all those writings in it. Didn't you destroy that book?
:iconsimplykit:
*very expressive and a nice flow of enery :)

*your so talented in writing :D :D

*keep up the great literary work my friend :)

*peace and rock on! :D :D

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*For what profit is it to a man...

*If he gains the whole world...

*Yet loses his own soul...

Mathew 16-26
:iconamaterasu12:
awwwww

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Pressure washing is FUN!
:iconmillie277:
Awesome! Aw, I hope u'll get better soon. I get depressed sometimes, even with no reason, but I get better really soon.

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~ It's better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you're not...~
Watch me, I'll watch u!
:iconwilwar77:
only love takes it away but with it it is always a brighter day LIGHT up someones life to day smile you are loved:loved:
:iconlovedlikewinter:
lovely.

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If I were the moon, I know where I would fall down.
:iconephend:
Life has a way of bringing us down. You are right we have to fight if we want to keep from letting it take over! Excellent piece! :lol:

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Musical Angels fill the air so listen to them sing for you!
:iconsasuru:
I love you very much!! ;__; depression suck *trust me I know, I've been diagnosed with it*

and life sinks to the bottom but, keep living it all gets better - I know it sounds corny but, just believe me - it all evens out.

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Not when Light had candy for breakfast! D8<
dansen base by = =Tzyoku
:iconmistresswinter:
I don't think I could ever see you getting really depressed or anything. Dunno why.
In my latest journal, I pretty much told some of the reason why I'm depressed. If I had said anymore, everyone woulda killed me. I totally destroyed that god awful book D: I hated it so much. The stuff in there isn't as good as my stuff is now.
:3 Thank you.


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I don't care if Monday's blue :cries:
Tuesday's gray and Wednesday too :raincloud:
Thursday I don't care about you :threaten:
It's Friday I'm in love:heart:

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